Thursday, January 30, 2014

Thursday, January 30, 2014--8:45 pm

Hello!

Below you will find copies of the handouts that were distributed on Wednesday in class:
1. Unacceptable Errors
2. Oral Presentation Assignment
3. Sample Student Q & C Homework


UNACCEPTABLE ERRORS
In English 1A, students should already be very proficient in word usage.  We do not have time for grammar lessons.  (I will, however, provide short ‘mini’ lessons when I feel they are warranted.)  The following errors that are commonly made on student papers are considered unacceptable.
For out of class essays and question & comment homework assignments, each unacceptable error takes ten points off your final earned grade. You may correct unacceptable errors and receive the points back if you choose to revise. This revision opportunity does NOT apply to homework—only for an out of class essay. In class essays that have unacceptable errors CAN always be corrected to earn back the points lost.

1.  there – place                                                Put it over there.
2.  their – possessive pronoun                        That is their car.
3.  they’re – contraction of they are                        They’re going with us.
4.  your – possessive pronoun                        Your dinner is ready.
5.  you’re – contraction of you are                        You’re not ready.
6.  it’s – contraction of it is                        It’s a sunny day.
7.  its – possessive pronoun                        The dog wagged its tail.
8.  a lot – always two words                        I liked it a lot.
9.  to – a preposition or part of an
      infinitive                                                I like to proofread my essays carefully.
10. too – an intensifier, or also                        That is too much.  I will go too.
11. two – a number                                    Give me two folders.
12. In today’s society            This phrase is grossly overused and very cliché. Instead use “Today” or “In America” or “Now” etc
13. right(s)/write(s)/rite(s)            rights are a set of beliefs or values in which a person feels entitled: His rights were read to him before he was arrested for stalking Dave Matthews. Writes is a verb indicating action taken with a pen, pencil or computers to convey a message: Michelle writes love letters to Dave Matthews in her sleep. Rites are a series of steps or events which lead an individual from one phase in life to the next, or a series of traditions that should be followed: The initiate began his rite of passage ceremony at the age of thirteen.
14. definitely/defiantly            This error USUALLY occurs when a writer relies solely on spell-check. You really must learn to become the final editor of your work. Definitely is an adverb and it means without a doubt. Mary will definitely miss the Dave Matthews Band concert. Defiantly means to show defiance. She was in a defiant mood. It is an adjective. Or it could be used as an adverb. She was defiantly rude and sullen towards the professor.
15. On your Works Cited page:            you MUST center and type at the top the heading just as it is here: Works Cited. NOT ALL CAPS, NOT BOLDED, NOT UNDERLINED, NOT MISSPELLED, NOT IN A DIFFERENT SIZED FONT, ETC.
16. woman/women            woman is used when you are referring to ONE female lady.
                                                            women is the plural of woman, meaning MORE THAN ONE lady
                                                            There are many women at the nail salon, but only one woman is shopping at the market next door.

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An accumulation of the following errors will affect your grade, but not 10 points off for EACH error.  My evaluation of your work depends on how serious the error is, and how often you make it.  Some do not slow up the reader as much as others.
  • Misuse of the word “you”.  You must actually mean the reader when you use the word “you”.

  • Avoid use of contractions in formal expository writing. (can’t, shouldn’t, didn’t, etc.)

  • Agreement of subject and verb.  Both must be either singular or plural.

  • Fragmented sentences, comma splices and run-ons.  Be sure to proofread your papers carefully before turning them in.

You will not pass English 1A if you cannot write an intelligent sentence in correct English.

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English 1A, College Composition I
Spring 2014
Instructor:  Catherine Fraga

Oral Presentation Assignment


The Significance of Home
Assigned:  Second week of semester
Due: Monday, May 12

For this assignment, please select an article, observation, photograph, painting, collage, film, song, poem, essay or anything else that offers some message or reflection on the theme of home.  It could have a personal meaning for you, but it does not have to. 
After you have selected your “item,” write a minimum of one page about the item.  Include a brief description of the item and a detailed explanation of why you chose this item; include a thoughtful commentary.  Proofread carefully for unacceptable errors as well as other proofreading mistakes.
On the day of presentations, please do not read your essay to the class, but simply summarize the main points aloud to the class.  The presentation usually takes only a few moments. You will submit a copy of the essay only to me.                                    
As the semester progresses, you may get ideas for your presentation from our readings, the films we will be viewing, or from class discussions.
Remember that you will not receive this short essay back nor will you receive any credit for the assignment if there are ANY unacceptable errors present.
Please do not take this assignment lightly.  It is worth 100 points.

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SAMPLE Q & C STUDENT RESPONSE:

Dave Matthews
Professor Fraga
English 1A, 1
2 February 2013
“Traveling through the Dark”
by William Stafford
Q: I have no question.
C:  During a very brief event on a dark country road, poet William Stafford chronicles a very somber and difficult decision the speaker has to make; Stafford has written a very universal poem. Even if the reader has never been in a similar situation, almost everyone has had to weigh the pros and cons of a challenging decision. By the end of the second stanza, when we learn that the dead deer is pregnant and her fawn is alive, we are drawn into the dilemma the speaker and his friends face.
This poem reminds me of what makes life so exciting and yet so frustrating at the same time. Whenever we make a decision, we are never completely guaranteed we have made the “right” decision; we just make the best decision we can based on the information we have.
            The last two lines of the poem are especially effective and very visual. The sadness seeps through the words: “I thought hard for us all…and then pushed her over the edge into the river.” In fact, Stafford’s careful word choice throughout the poem keeps the reader focused and tense. Sometimes living is very much like “traveling through the dark” without any signs for direction.





Tuesday, January 28, 2014

Tuesday, January 28th, 2014--7:30 pm

Hello,
Below you will find a revised, correct copy of the Grade Worksheet. Please print a copy of this version and do not use the previous version that was distributed with your syllabus yesterday. Thanks!


English 1A, Spring 2014, Prof. Fraga
GRADE WORKSHEET-----2275 POINTS POSSIBLE
Stapler Check (25 pts.)
Monday, February 3—stapler in your possession!______
Oral Presentation=(100 pts.)
Oral Pres._____(100)
Out of Class Essays (800 points)
Out of Class Essay 1_____(200 pts.)  Out of Class Essay 2_____(400 pts.)  Out of Class Essay 3_____(200 pts.)
Rules of Thumb Quizzes (300 points)
Pgs. 1-60 (100)_____     Pgs. 115-166 (100)_____    Pgs 136-149 (100)_____
Unannounced Quizzes (250) (50 points each)
Quiz 1____Quiz 2_____Quiz 3_____Quiz 4_____Quiz 5_____
Homework=(400 pts.)
Q and C #1 (100)_____Q and C #2 (100)_____Q and C #3 (100)_____Q and C #4 (100)_____
In Class Group Work (200 pts.)
Group Work 1 (50 pts)_____Group Work 2 (50 pts)_____Group Work 3 (50 pts)_____Group Work 4 (50 pts)_____
In Class Essays (200 pts.)
In class essay #1 (100)_____In class essay #2 (100) _____
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How to assess your grade earned: Divide the points you earn by 2275 to find the percentage. Then see chart below.
100-94=A                         63-60=C-                                    Example: 1555 pts. earned=68.3% =C
93-90=A-                        59-54=D                                    Example: 1601 pts. earned=70.3=C+
89-84=B+                         53-0=F                                                Example: 2020 pts. earned=88.7=B+
83-80=B                                                                         Example: 1886 pts. earned=82.9=B
79-74=B-
73-70=C+
69-64=C


Sunday, January 26, 2014

Sunday evening, January 26th, 2014


Greetings

By the time you read this, you will have already attended the first day of class. As I explained in class, all copies of handouts will be posted on the blog for your convenience. 

Below you will find a copy of the course syllabus distributed today in class. You will ALSO find your reading assignments for both Packet 1 and Packet 2. As you will note on the syllabus, Packet 1 is due to be read by Monday, Feb. 3rd. Packet 2 is due to be read by Wednesday, Feb. 5th.


SPRING 2014, CSU SACRAMENTO
COURSE:  English 1A:  College Composition I
Section 11 MW, 130-245 pm, Douglass Hall 111
INSTRUCTOR:  Catherine Fraga
E-mail:  sacto1954@gmail.com
Office Hours:  CLV 149, MWF 12:15 PM-1:15 PM or by appointment

CLASS BLOG: www.English1ASpring2014.blogspot.com

Prerequisites:  Placement by examination OR successful completion of English 1 or its equivalent.
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REQUIRED TEXTS & MATERIALS
·      House as a Mirror of Self: Exploring the Deeper Meaning of Home
By Clare Cooper Marcus
Publisher:  Conari Press

·      The Unwanted:  A Memoir of Childhood
by Kien Nguyen
Publisher:  Bay Back Books

***This book must be read by Wednesday, April 2

·      House of Sand and Fog
by Andre Dubus III
Publisher: W. W. Norton & Co.

***Part One must be read by Monday, April 14
***Part Two must be read by Monday, April 21

·      Rules of Thumb:  A Guide for Writers—9th Edition
by Jay Silverman, Elaine Hughes, Diana Roberts Wienbroer
Publisher:  McGraw-Hill

·      8 1/2” x 11” lined notebook paper (paper that is torn out of a notebook without a straight edge will not be accepted).

·      Stapler

COURSE DESCRIPTION:
English 1A is a freshman writing course that offers students the opportunity to learn and develop the reading and writing skills that will be most useful to them during a four-year college program.  The course is designed to help students improve their ability to understand and critically judge reading material and to write an essay which has a single controlling idea and which is coherently developed using idiomatically and grammatically correct English.

The heart of the course is readings that require a range of narrative, analytical, reflective and research writing skills.

COURSE REQUIREMENTS:

1.     Attendance and punctuality are required.  I have designed this course so that it depends on your presence and participation.  If you’re absent, you are still responsible for finding out what you’ve missed (including lecture notes, handouts, changes in due dates, etc.)  Refer to your class phone list.  

2.     Having more than three absences will seriously alter your final grade.  This is not because I do not consider you mature enough to make a commitment to a class; it is because if you do miss more than 3 classes, you miss group work, or in class writing, or a journal assignment, or a quiz, or an in class essay assignment, and/or a bevy of other possible events, all of which affect the grade you earn (see #8 below).  Please communicate with me.  I am very understanding and reasonable.

3.     If you must miss a class on a day an assignment is due, you are still responsible for getting the assignment to me on time.  Again, use the phone list, call your mother, or???  This is merely a fairness issue; we all have life situations that are often difficult and unexpected, and if others manage to still get their work in on time, I cannot give special exceptions to just a few.  If you miss class and would like to e-mail me your work, you must first contact me for permission. Again, this is a fairness issue.

4.     There will be numerous reading and writing assignments in this course.  Weekly reading assignments will be given, and I expect you to complete them on time and come prepared to class.  We may not get an opportunity to discuss everything we read in class, but that is inevitable in any college course.

5.     You will complete a question and comment assignment for several of the reading assignments.  The question is optional, but the commentary is not. Your commentary must be a minimum of eight sentences in length.  (I know ALL the shortcuts students may try.  Be assured that if you write eight very general, short, simple sentences you will not receive credit for the assignment. A thorough explanation of what is required for these question and comment assignments and a sample will be provided.)  No late homework will be accepted.

An out of class essay may be handed in late, but there is a stiff penalty.  For every day your essay is late, the grade for that essay will drop a full ten points. This includes weekends. Points subtracted for lateness cannot be made up during the revision process.

6.     Journal writing assignments are assigned and completed in class and are not allowed to be made up. 

7.     English 1A is graded A, B, C, D, or F.  Do not assume that because you have not submitted one or more of the three out of class essay assignments, you will still be able to pass the course.  Even though you have missed the due date, and have an automatic “F” for that assignment, YOU STILL MUST WRITE AND SUBMIT ALL THREE OUT OF CLASS ESSAYS TO PASS THE COURSE.

A note on classroom etiquette:
If you feel you cannot survive each class session without the use of your cell phone, iPod, or laptop computer, please do not enroll in this class. (I own all three of these devices, and value each of them, but I do not plan on using them during my classroom time with you. Simply, it is the highest degree of rudeness and disrespect.)  If I see you busy texting, etc. I will not hesitate to ask you to leave until you finish your crucial business. I plan to give you my full attention and I expect the same from all my students.

About being tardy for class: 
It seems that over the last few years, tardiness has REALLY escalated and become problematic in my classes. I am not sure why, but I do know that most of my colleagues deduct a percentage of the earned grade for tardiness. It is really annoying and disruptive, both to me and the rest of the class, when students enter the class late—we only meet for 75 minutes twice a week, and I begin class immediately. In the “real world”, there is even less tolerance for lateness. Plan ahead. I realize things can happen beyond your control, but looking for parking is not a good excuse. If I see that tardiness is becoming excessive, I may have to ask you to drop the class.

About Extra Credit:
Quite simply, I do not believe in extra credit. In “real life” there is no extra credit. When one makes an error, one hopefully learns from the error and moves on.

About Rough Drafts:
For all three out of class essay assignments, you may submit a rough draft. This is purely optional. Due dates for these rough drafts can be found on the course outline.

About Revisions:
You have the option to revise ONE of the three out of class essays. The revision must be submitted within one week of receiving it back with my comments. ALL CHANGES TO THE ORIGINAL MUST BE HIGHLIGHTED ON THE REVISION. If you are still not pleased with your earned score after receiving the revision back from me, you may continue to revise this one essay until you are pleased. Additional revisions do not have a due date—it just must be submitted by the last day of the course.

Theme:  The Significance of Home

·      We will consider home as our course-long theme. The significance of home – as a place of beginnings, as a starting point, as a place of comfort, regret, anguish, joy, personal growth, and loss – fuels a meaningful, intriguing collection of themes.  Home is a base from which all of us emerge.

·      Most of us have pre-conceived notions of home as a place of love, comfort, security.  For millions of children, however, these definitions do not fit their reality of home as a place to escape: escape from cycles of poverty, mistrust, abuse.

·      The course will explore not only home as a safety net, but also the illusions we have of home perpetuated by Madison Avenue advertising agencies. 

·      What are our expectations of home?  Again, does our “real” home live up to the expectations society has created?  How do different cultural values and priorities play a role in determining what home should and should not be?  Attempting to answer these questions is the task I have set for us during this semester. 

·      What does it mean to leave home for the first time?  What does it mean to be rootless, without a home?  

·      Finally, how can we reconnect to the earth as home, knowing full well that the lives we have created for ourselves impact the finite planet all of us call home?

·      We view at least two films which explore the theme of home. These films will allow us to observe and witness concepts we have read about and discussed.

COURSE OUTLINE
(Please note:  Bring this outline to class each session; changes could occur at a moment’s notice.  Also, most reading and writing assignments are noted -- other class exercises and lectures may not be noted specifically)

ALL OUT OF CLASS ASSIGNMENTS (HOMEWORK, ESSAYS, ETC) MUST BE TYPED AND DOUBLE SPACED UNLESS INSTRUCTED OTHERWISE. PLEASE USE TIMES NEW ROMAN, 12 POINT FONT.

Week One (1/27-1/31)
·      Introduction to the Course (course theme explained) (Monday)
·      Course Outline Distributed (handout) (Monday)
·      Question/Comment Homework Explained (Wed.)
·      Unacceptable Errors & Oral Presentation assigned (handouts) (Wed.)
·      Discussion: Reading and Evaluating Short Fiction (Wed.)

Week Two (2/3-2/7)
·      Stapler Check (worth 25 points) (Monday)
·      Read Short Fiction Packet  #1 (Monday)
·      BE SURE TO BRING SYLLABUS TO CLASS TODAY (Monday)
·      Read Short Fiction Packet 2 (Wednesday) Q & C #1 due today
·      Group Work #1 (Wednesday)

Week Three (2/10-2/14)
·      Read Chapters 1& 2 in House as Mirror of Self (Monday)
·      Quiz based on pgs. 2-60 in Rules of Thumb (Wednesday)
·      Out of Class Essay #1 assigned today (Wednesday)

Week Four (2/17-2/21)
·      Discussion: How to Evaluate a Documentary Film (Monday)
·      Read Chapters 3, 4 and 5 in House as Mirror of Self  (Monday)
·      Concentrated lessons on grammar and punctuation (Wed.)

Week Five (2/24-2/28)
·      View documentary film, Daughter from Danang by today (this film is on reserve in Media in the CSUS Library) (Monday)
·      Preparation for in-class writing tomorrow (Monday)
·      In-Class Essay #1 (Wednesday)
·      Optional: ROUGH DRAFT OF OUT OF CLASS ESSAY #1 DUE NO LATER THAN TODAY, WEDNESDAY, AT MIDNIGHT. DRAFT MUST BE E-MAILED TO ME AS A WORD DOCUMENT AND I WILL E-MAIL IT BACK TO YOU WITH MY COMMENTARY.

Week Six (3/3-3/7)
·      Read Chapters 6 & 7 in House as Mirror of Self (Monday) Q & C #2 due today
·      Read pgs. 112-134 in Rules of Thumb (Monday)
·      Quiz on pgs. 112-134 (see above) (Monday)
·      Out of Class Essay 1 due today (Wed.)
·      Group Work #2 (Wed.)
·      Out of class #2 assigned today (Wed.)

Week Seven (3/10-3/14)
·      Discuss MLA Documentation in class (Mon. & Wed.)
·      Read pages 136-149 in Rules of Thumb (Wed.)
·      Quiz on pages 136-149 (see above) (Wed.)

Week Eight (3/17-3/21)
·      Read Chapter 8 in The House as Mirror of Self  (Mon.) Q & C #3 due today
·      Read Chapter 9 in The House as Mirror of Self (Wed.)
·      Group Work #3 (Wednesday)
    Optional: ROUGH DRAFT OF OUT OF CLASS ESSAY #2 DUE NO LATER THAN TODAY, FRIDAY, AT MIDNIGHT. DRAFT MUST BE E-MAILED TO ME AS A WORD DOCUMENT AND I WILL E-MAIL IT BACK TO YOU WITH MY COMMENTARY(Friday)

Week Nine (3/24-3/30)

SPRING BREAK—no classes—enjoy and be safe.

Week Ten:  (3/31-4/4 )
·      No class today. Campus-wide holiday. C. Chavez B/D (Monday)
·      The Unwanted MUST be read by today (Wednesday)
·      Discuss The Unwanted (Wednesday)

Week Eleven: (4/7-4/11)
·      Out of class essay #2 due today (Monday)
·      Out of class essay #3 assigned (Monday)
·      Read Chapter 10 in The House as Mirror of Self (Wednesday)

Week Twelve:  (4/14-4/18)
·      Part One of  House of Sand and Fog, pages 15-218, due today (Monday)
Q & C #4 due today
·      Group Work #4 (Wed.)

Week Thirteen:  (4/21-4/25)
·      Part Two of  House of Sand and Fog, Pages 221-365, due today (Mon.)
·      Discuss entire novel, House of Sand and Fog (Wed.)
·      Optional: ROUGH DRAFT OF OUT OF CLASS ESSAY #3 DUE NO LATER THAN TODAY, WEDNESDAY, AT MIDNIGHT. DRAFT MUST BE E-MAILED TO ME AS A WORD DOCUMENT AND I WILL E-MAIL IT BACK TO YOU WITH MY COMMENTARY. (Wed.)

Week Fourteen:  (4/28-5/2)
·      The film, House of Sand and Fog, must be viewed by today. The film is on reserve for viewing in Media at the CSUS library. (Monday)
·      Out of class essay #3 due today (Wed.)
·      In class essay #2 on novel & film, House of Sand and Fog (Wed.)

Week Fifteen (5/5-5/9)
·      Discussion: How to Critically Read an Essay (Mon and Wed)

Week Sixteen (5/12-5/16)
·      Oral Presentations (Mon.)
·      Last class day (Wed.) Today you will bring to class your gradesheet and all your graded work that you have saved from the semester.

Week Seventeen FINALS WEEK
THERE IS NO FINAL EXAM IN THIS CLASS.























English 1A, Spring 2014, Prof. Fraga
GRADE WORKSHEET-----1675 POINTS POSSIBLE
Stapler Check (25 pts.)
Monday, February 3—stapler in your possession!______
Oral Presentation=(100 pts.)
Oral Pres._____(100)
Out of Class Essays (800 points)
Out of Class Essay 1_____(200 pts.)  Out of Class Essay 2_____(400 pts.)  Out of Class Essay 3_____(200 pts.)
Rules of Thumb Quizzes (300 points)
Pgs. 1-60 (100)_____     Pgs. 115-166 (100)_____    Pgs 136-149 (100)_____
Unannounced Quizzes (250) (50 points each)
Quiz 1____Quiz 2_____Quiz 3_____Quiz 4_____Quiz 5_____
Homework=(400 pts.)
Q and C #1 (100)_____Q and C #2 (100)_____Q and C #3 (100)_____Q and C #4 (100)_____
In Class Group Work (200 pts.)
Group Work 1 (50 pts)_____Group Work 2 (50 pts)_____Group Work 3 (50 pts)_____Group Work 4 (50 pts)_____
In Class Essays (200 pts.)
In class essay #1 (100)_____In class essay #2 (100) _____
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How to assess your grade earned: Divide the points you earn by 1675 to find the percentage. Then see chart below.
100-94=A                         63-60=C-                                    Example: 1455 pts. earned=86.8% =B+
93-90=A-                        59-54=D                                    Example: 1601 pts. earned=95.5%=A
89-84=B+                         53-0=F                                                Example: 1333 pts. earned=79.5%=B-
83-80=B                                                                         Example: 1200 pts. earned=71.6%=C+
79-74=B-
73-70=C+
69-64=C

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PACKET 1 ASSIGNMENT:
"Clothes"
a short story by Chitra Divakaruni
http://www.woodsidehs.org/uploadedFiles/file_642.pdf

"Why Don't You Dance?"
a short story by Raymond Carver
http://www.greathill.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/Story-Carver-Why-Dont-You-Dance.pdf

PACKET 2 ASSIGNMENT:
"Show & Tell"
a short story by Andrew Lam
http://www.terrain.org/fiction/2/lam.htm

"The Wig"
a short short story by Brady Udall
complete story is below:

THE WIG



By Brady Udall

(First Prize:  Story’s Short Short Competition)


My eight-year-old son found a wig in the garbage Dumpster this morning. I walked into the kitchen, highly irritated that I couldn’t make a respectable knot in my green paisley tie, and there he was at the table, eating cereal and reading the funnies, the wig pulled tightly over his head like a football helmet.  The wig was a dirty bush of curly blond hair, the kind you might see on a prostitute or someone who is trying to imitate Marilyn Monroe.

I asked where he got the wig and he told me, his mouth full of cereal.  When I advised him that we don’t wear things we find in the garbage, he simply continued eating and reading as if he didn’t hear me.

I wanted him to take that wig off but I couldn’t ask him to do it.  I forgot all about my tie and going to work.  I looked out the window where mist fell slowly on the street.  I paced into the living room and back, trying not to look at my son.  He ignored me.  I could hear him munching cereal and rustling paper.

There was a picture, or a memory, real or imagined, that I couldn’t get out of my mind:  Last fall, before the accident, my wife was sitting in the chair where now my son always sits.  She was reading the paper to see how the Blackhawks did the night before, and her sleep-mussed hair was only slightly longer and darker than the hair of my son’s wig.

I wondered if my son had a similar picture in his head, or if he had a picture at all.  I watched him and he finally looked up at me but his face was blank.  He went back to his reading.  I walked around the table, picked him up, and held him against my chest.  I pressed my nose into that wig and it smelled not like the clean shampoo scent I might have been hoping for, but like old lettuce.  I suppose it didn’t matter at that point.  My son put his smooth arms around my neck and for maybe a few seconds we were together again, the three of us.